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Artist's Comments
EDIT: Thanks for the critiques, I've corrected thoose mistakes.. I hope, and I think, It worth the time to correct them
Hope you like it, because i spend a lot of time with it Critique is much aperaticed! Some Info: Time spent: 4-5 hour + 1 hour with correcting the mistakes Frames: 32 Colors: Uhm, a LOT! It'S a colorful one Made with: gimp CommentsIt looks great! But maybe the mountains should be moving in the background? Idk how much they would move, being far away and all, but I think it looks kinda funny with the grass moving in the foreground but the background is stationary. Other than that, it looks fantastic. You can tell it took a while.
-- Taking pictures, Writing songs, Faving good art, Collecting fractals. My DA life in a nutshell. ------ If great minds think alike then how do all the idiots think? Yeah.
It looks so awesome, all this details. You're so welcome. -- Patrick Rügheimer DD Suggestion Whore omg thats freaking amazing
the tank is just insanely well done and the firing effects are great -- meet great emoticonists at Emoticiety Learn to make emotes at Emotication |
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Critiques
I absolutely love this animation. The mere fact that it includes an emote-controlled tank makes it worth faving.
But I saw so much more in it. The animation and various expressions of the emotes keep me staring at this animation further. Simply if not for finding something that I missed.
Even the simple background adds so much to this deviation.
But I would have to say that my favorite part is the sleeping emote. Despite the deviation-rattling cannon fire, they keep on snoozing.
(Though I'd kick anyone off my tank that decided to drool on it. It seems the driver is too busy causing carnage to notice.)
And when I see that you made it in GIMP as well. It encourages me to perhaps try my own hand at emoting.
The only thing I see that's kinda sketchy here is the lag during the cannon fire. It seems to pause a bit long during it. But it's not nearly enough to take away from this masterpiece.
I said it once, and I'll say it again. This, is amazing.
Well done!
As said, it is very well done. From the emoticions to the pixel tank and details such as the background and the grass. The pixel work seems fantastic to me. That's my opinnion. The sky on the background has beautiful colors and it has been pixelled to perfection. The grass is simple, but yet ellegant. The tank itself is too kind of simple, but it is superb also.
The animation is really cute. Specially the guy sleeping (and drooling
But yeah. Very well done emoticon, nice add to =Emoticiety's gallery
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