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Artist's Comments
Indeed.. Jark has travelled to earth and keep killing and seducing victims on his way..
Well... this was not my first idea.. At first I just made the background, and the bloody emote.. Wanted to add some gun effect too, but I felt like that that idea is not that special as this one.. So decided to do jark I hope you like it! Critiques are welcome! Some info: Layers of the background: 30 Time spent: 4 hours Made with: GIMP Ohh, and Jark belongs to dA I think CommentsNice job on the background!
Up butt light saber. -- Because you can never use too many emoticons. Excellent pixelwork!
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Critiques
This is epic. The clouds are amazing and were pixeled wonderfully. I love the background in general--you did a great job on keeping a low color count with it being that detailed.
The animation is short but affective and it makes me laugh. I love how the blood puddles (even if the shadow beneath it is a bit awkward).
The road is...eh, it's not as good as the rest of the picture, but it's still good on most standards.
I can't really tell where the light spot is (unless I look at the emotes, but I'm talking about in the background).
But otherwise, very awesome.
The blood splurting out of the yellow emote is nicely animated and I like the small shines you put there. the two emotes that are blinking seem to be blinking every second, so i think making them blink every two loops would make it look better. The jark's animation is good, but it seems a bit plain
the shadings look great, but the shine on the red emote stands out a bit too much, and I think you should make is a bit less white.
What else can I say? the rest is perfect.
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